Daniella's holiday report

During my summer holidays, I went to Scotland to visit my relatives. The first people we went to see was my Uncle John, Aunt Sylvia and my two cousins, Andrew and Cathrine. We went to the fair and my brother got a teddy, whilst I was unlucky and got a pig instead. We also went to a cuircus and my favourites were the clowns. But my favourite time was when we went to a famous ice-cream parlor. The line was very long, but it was worth it! The ice-cream was delicious! Before I forget, I also wrote this half finished story, I will complete it.